thesis statements

1. road rage can cause numerous negative effects on our roads and highways.

2. most people young or old mind the mild violence in disney films.

3. there are so many different types of ants.

4. animals can show how human kindness affects our world.

5. there are so many different reasons for droughts.

6. stephen king wrote many great books like The Shining.

7. there are so many things we can learn about the titanic sinking in teh atlantic ocean.

8. there are many kinds of drugs that americans become addicted to today.

9. saving private ryan has alot of elements that we could learn from.

10. Rabbits can be difficult animals to raise and sometimes to care for.

11. most people would agree that the president of the united states of america should have
charisma, compassion, and control because these elements define good a character.

12. there is a huge realm of drop-dead gorgeous beauty pageants that we could learn from.

13. some people will agree to disagree that school unifroms are necessary.

14. william shakespeare wrote some of the most wonderful novels.

15. There are alot of good things about aromatherapy like that it helps soothe mind, body, and spirit.

post #1 Audience, Purpose, & Design

Audience curently plays a large role in how i write today. My writing differs for who im writing for, my teachers see the very best of my writing, usually, and my friends see the sloppy just get to the point writing that has little design and puncuation. When writing for a proper audience my design is to the best of my ability. Design plays a huge role in my writing because if im writing with no puncuation, style, or paragraph structure no one even the audience im writing for will want to read what i wrote. When im thinking of what to write my papers on i try to make sure i have a clear purpose so i dont get lost in my writing. I want the person whos reading it to understand not get lost in the words the wrong way.